Comment for assignment (5th comment)

Your post is very well made. It never lost track of what you were trying to convey which made it easy to understand everything you did from point A to B. I really like the structure if your post, making small titles for some of the paragraphs made me understand what it was going to be about. Making it easier to understand the paragraph and the entire text as a whole.

You also got a picture in it to show how many voted and what they voted on which gave priceless insight on why you decided to change things. One thing that could have made the post just a little bit better would be to include a link to the post where you mentioned the movement you were referencing at the beginning.

Since I haven’t read it I didn’t understand that part as much as you would have wanted the reader to do.

Other than that I can’t really see anything that you need to improve. It’s well made, well structured and easy to read. All in all, a great blog!

 

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